need help in improving the essay
I currently received 82% for the paper attached below, need help in getting 90% or above
the teachers comments say that I need to focus more on the themes related to the story instead of paraphrasing it so much
instructions and 1st draft of the essay is attached below
link for the story
https://genius.com/John-cheever-reunion-annotated
some good content on the themes can be found here
http://sittingbee.com/reunion-john-cheever/