PLEASE REVIEW AND MAKE ADJUSTMENTS according to the instructor’s response..
Response from my teacher:
I just looked over your assignment. You have a good start. You have identified the main idea from the article. Please work on the following:
Present your assignment in third person point of view. This is a formal assignment and not a personal narrative.
Revise the thesis statement so that it lists two points that support the viewpoint or perspective.
Once you identify the two points, then use the first point listed to write a topic sentence for the second paragraph. The details that follow must support the topic sentence.
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