*Can take out subheading “Introduction”
*Fix subheading “Literature review” in center and move “Gender differences in Christians’ views on abortion to the left in bold.
*Move religion, gender, abortion to the left and in bold
*On P.5 “Christian Males’ perspectives in bold.
* On P.6 Move ” Current Study” to the center and also add more info about why you are doing this study. you can say that since the literature on Christian feminism began in 1980 and has evolved since then, you are interested in current perspective on abortion (Cambell, 1980, Dean & Aune, 2015). Then add your research question. “What are the views of Christian male vs christian females”
* Format should be Participants, measures, data collection , data analysis.
On Page 7. Combine paragraphs under method and paragraph under measures together. The subheading for this is Measures.
* For the Data collection and method should state how and where you collected the data where are participants from. (Collected the data by making a series of questions for an online survey…Got my participants from online off a christian facebook club.
