Help me correct my essay and get an a

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Narrative of the life of frederick douglass:

https://www.gutenberg.org/files/23/23-h/23-h.htm#link2HCH0001

 

Follow the instruction that I uploaded.

 

And use the photo that I took to make a good thesis. (Thesis is important)

 

Use mla form.

 

I think I have so much body paragraphs and quotes pls correct it and follow this General Essay Writing.

http://www.internationalstudent.com/essay_writing/essay_tips/

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