You’re off to a great start! A couple of comments:
— Capitalize your film’s title in the first paragraph. Be aware of grammar generally.
— You could consider expanding/adding to your paper director/actor bios, cinematography, editing, music, sound, the film’s influence on other films and what was the social context of the film, meaning how did it reflect its time period.
— You may want to add a few more references.
Otherwise, it’s developing wonderfully.
